Invisable

       Hey my name is Jose and in the pool with Adam Sandler at a big party. There's alot of actors here and i want to get their autorgraph, but I can't. The reason why is because they can't see me, im invisable and i can control when I want to be seen and when I don't want to see. Like rite now I'm staying invisable because if I turn visable then I might scare alot of people and then I'll get kicked out.
        It all started when iwas just a little kid. My dream was to be invisable so nobody could see me and i would be able to do what ever I wanted. So i told some of my cuzins and freinds I wanted to be invisable and all they said was that's impossible for that to happen. But i didn't let them bring me down. So, instead me,  my mom, and my dad for vacation. While we were down there we visited  alot of old temples and pyrimids. Once we came to the main pyrimid and while on tour around it i snuck off. I walked on into the dark for a minute or so, and just as I was about to turn around to go back I felt a handle infront of me. It was like a latch so i pulled it. It was dark in the room but there was a switch lantern as soon as you walked in. So I flipped it flipped it on, then the greatest thing of my life happend. I found the temples gold their wastons and tons of it, everywhere. So I jumped in joy thinking how rich im going to be. But as i was stuffing my pockets with gold a shinning light shined in my eyes. I backed away and looked to see where it was coming from. To my surprise the shining light was coming from a solid gold lamp high in the corner. It was reflecting from the rays of the sun squeezing through the cracks of the wall. I tried to climb up the wall to get it, thinking the whole way this was my chance to be invisible. There might be a magic geney in it. I was so exited and I finally reached it. So I grabbed it and dropped down. Then I slowly rubbed my hand across the lustering gold back and fourth...........