My Top 3 Posts Are: Christmas Story
Invisible
What Does The World Say About Beauty
My Best Example Of Creativity Is In the "Christmas Story" because i wrote about santa and his elfs and compared them to famous people because of the poperotsy.
Evidence of my growth as a writer is in the story "Invisble" because when I used description like lustering gold and at the end I left the reader thinkimg what happen next. I wouldn't had been able to do that at the begginning of the year.
Proof that I am a thinker/learner is in the story "What Does The World Say About Beauty" because I had to learn and research what beauty actually is then after that I put and compared it all in a story.
Thursday, February 23, 2012
Thursday, February 16, 2012
Invisable
Hey my name is Jose and in the pool with Adam Sandler at a big party. There's alot of actors here and i want to get their autorgraph, but I can't. The reason why is because they can't see me, im invisable and i can control when I want to be seen and when I don't want to see. Like rite now I'm staying invisable because if I turn visable then I might scare alot of people and then I'll get kicked out.
It all started when iwas just a little kid. My dream was to be invisable so nobody could see me and i would be able to do what ever I wanted. So i told some of my cuzins and freinds I wanted to be invisable and all they said was that's impossible for that to happen. But i didn't let them bring me down. So, instead me, my mom, and my dad for vacation. While we were down there we visited alot of old temples and pyrimids. Once we came to the main pyrimid and while on tour around it i snuck off. I walked on into the dark for a minute or so, and just as I was about to turn around to go back I felt a handle infront of me. It was like a latch so i pulled it. It was dark in the room but there was a switch lantern as soon as you walked in. So I flipped it flipped it on, then the greatest thing of my life happend. I found the temples gold their wastons and tons of it, everywhere. So I jumped in joy thinking how rich im going to be. But as i was stuffing my pockets with gold a shinning light shined in my eyes. I backed away and looked to see where it was coming from. To my surprise the shining light was coming from a solid gold lamp high in the corner. It was reflecting from the rays of the sun squeezing through the cracks of the wall. I tried to climb up the wall to get it, thinking the whole way this was my chance to be invisible. There might be a magic geney in it. I was so exited and I finally reached it. So I grabbed it and dropped down. Then I slowly rubbed my hand across the lustering gold back and fourth...........
It all started when iwas just a little kid. My dream was to be invisable so nobody could see me and i would be able to do what ever I wanted. So i told some of my cuzins and freinds I wanted to be invisable and all they said was that's impossible for that to happen. But i didn't let them bring me down. So, instead me, my mom, and my dad for vacation. While we were down there we visited alot of old temples and pyrimids. Once we came to the main pyrimid and while on tour around it i snuck off. I walked on into the dark for a minute or so, and just as I was about to turn around to go back I felt a handle infront of me. It was like a latch so i pulled it. It was dark in the room but there was a switch lantern as soon as you walked in. So I flipped it flipped it on, then the greatest thing of my life happend. I found the temples gold their wastons and tons of it, everywhere. So I jumped in joy thinking how rich im going to be. But as i was stuffing my pockets with gold a shinning light shined in my eyes. I backed away and looked to see where it was coming from. To my surprise the shining light was coming from a solid gold lamp high in the corner. It was reflecting from the rays of the sun squeezing through the cracks of the wall. I tried to climb up the wall to get it, thinking the whole way this was my chance to be invisible. There might be a magic geney in it. I was so exited and I finally reached it. So I grabbed it and dropped down. Then I slowly rubbed my hand across the lustering gold back and fourth...........
Thursday, February 2, 2012
Christmas Story
We’re here in the north pole trying to see what’s the hold up on present making for Christmas this year. We are now waiting right outside of the workshop where all the toy building elves and Santa Clause are. All we want to do is interview them and ask questions on whats going on this year. We’re just the reporters why won’t they talk?This is Elf News we’ll see you next time....
Hey my name is Jerry and I’m the head elf in present making. This year was a very tight Christmas because we slowed down on our present making. But we finally came to our senses and kicked into gear. We built and rapped all the presents in nine months. It sounds like a long time but it’s actually a record, because every other year it took eleven and a half months. This is the tenth month and we are already done now we have nothing to do but play and joke with Santa. But the only problem is the elf news they won’t stop bothering us, and they don’t know we are already done. So they sit outside all day long waiting for one of us to come outside, but none of us will because all they want to do is ask questions and interview us, it’s like they are our own paparazzi. They are so annoying.
Hey this is Santa and I'm beginning to get very bored just sitting here for two months with nothing to do. All I'm doing is eating cookies and drinking milk all day long. I’m ready for Christmas to be here but I'm not completely prepared because my slay broke down last year and the elf mechanics still haven't fixed it. All they have to do is get the rein deers to eat the magic carrots and they won’t be sick any more. We need Rudolph’s nose and we need their magic Christmas spirit. Without them we won’t be able to deliver every ones presents. But the real reason they are still sick is because we can’t get to the carrot farm because of all the reporters. The minute one of us step outside that door it’s over. They won’t let you leave until you answer all of their questions. They are so annoying.
Hey this is Elf News again. You heard their side of the story about how it’s our fault Christmas might not be possible this year but all they have to do is answer our questions. Well we’ll see what happens so see you next time.
Hey my name is Jerry and I’m the head elf in present making. This year was a very tight Christmas because we slowed down on our present making. But we finally came to our senses and kicked into gear. We built and rapped all the presents in nine months. It sounds like a long time but it’s actually a record, because every other year it took eleven and a half months. This is the tenth month and we are already done now we have nothing to do but play and joke with Santa. But the only problem is the elf news they won’t stop bothering us, and they don’t know we are already done. So they sit outside all day long waiting for one of us to come outside, but none of us will because all they want to do is ask questions and interview us, it’s like they are our own paparazzi. They are so annoying.
Hey this is Santa and I'm beginning to get very bored just sitting here for two months with nothing to do. All I'm doing is eating cookies and drinking milk all day long. I’m ready for Christmas to be here but I'm not completely prepared because my slay broke down last year and the elf mechanics still haven't fixed it. All they have to do is get the rein deers to eat the magic carrots and they won’t be sick any more. We need Rudolph’s nose and we need their magic Christmas spirit. Without them we won’t be able to deliver every ones presents. But the real reason they are still sick is because we can’t get to the carrot farm because of all the reporters. The minute one of us step outside that door it’s over. They won’t let you leave until you answer all of their questions. They are so annoying.
Hey this is Elf News again. You heard their side of the story about how it’s our fault Christmas might not be possible this year but all they have to do is answer our questions. Well we’ll see what happens so see you next time.
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