Hunger Games Review

I rate this movie a 5 and it was basically the same as the book but I was kind of dis appointed that they left a couple of parts out like, when they left the medilyins off the dog beast, and when they left out the part when Haymich fell down the stage at the sairimony. But over all I liked it because it had lots of action and fighting in it and the way the desiner did the flames on there clothes was awsome. I also liked it when district 11 started going crazy when rue died close to the end. At the end when they opened the train door it was cool because Gale was holding Prim on his shoulders and she was ok so he kept his promise on feeding her and not letting her gt hurt. So she was happy to be back be able to have food suplies.

Novel blog

I read alot of interesting things in this book like how the USA is the USSA for straight safety reasons. I like it most because the main character's grandpa lived in our geniration so he does alot of things we would do. And its crazy and cool how the main character Bo got set up by this guy to make it look like he was giving out the rash. So that guy stole his girl and his privlegiss. I cant wait to see what happens next because he just was sent to jail and already got hit in the stomach by an officer.

Newburge Streets

The world as I see it is bad people good people, debts and riches, drugs and medicine, cops and robbers, army military and wars over seas, busted and still wanted. Shot dead or still alive but why, why did it have to be one of mine, they didnt even give him a chance to shine, 22 and already under ground family with a frown asking is he coming back the cops had to be strapped and now you cant take him back 7 shots in da back on the block pop pop pop just stop, stop the violence on Liberty street.

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Trip To Space Part 1

     Yes I'm finally back home after six months in space. The trip there was long and awesome in many ways. I even got to walk on the moon, and we where going to go visit that new planet but it was to far away into another galaxy. So ok, this is how it all started. I was at home one morning then while I was about to go to sleep I got a call on the phone,it was Neal Armstrong. I jumped happedly because the first man to walk on the moon just called me. He told that me and three of my friends won a trip to the moon.
     When I hung up the phone I started going crazy. I couldn't beleve that I was actually going to go to the moon. But before I went I had to ask my parents. Now that was going to be hard because my parents didn't even like me out for a couple days. This trip was six monthes! Then after days and days begging they finally said I could go. So now all I had to do was prepare for it because it was going to be hard and long to do this. The bright side thow is that I didnt have to pack all my clothes and things. The reason why is because NASA gave me and my three best freinds these special suits that we wore will we where there.

ELA Showcase

My Top 3 Posts Are: Christmas Story
                                  Invisible
                                  What Does The World Say About Beauty

My Best Example Of Creativity Is In the "Christmas Story" because i wrote about santa and his elfs and compared them to famous people because of the poperotsy.

Evidence of my growth as a writer is in the story "Invisble" because when I used description like lustering gold and at the end I left the reader thinkimg what happen next. I wouldn't had been able to do that at the begginning of the year.

Proof that I am a thinker/learner is in the story "What Does The World Say About Beauty" because I had to learn and research what beauty actually is then after that I put and compared it all in a story.

Invisable

       Hey my name is Jose and in the pool with Adam Sandler at a big party. There's alot of actors here and i want to get their autorgraph, but I can't. The reason why is because they can't see me, im invisable and i can control when I want to be seen and when I don't want to see. Like rite now I'm staying invisable because if I turn visable then I might scare alot of people and then I'll get kicked out.
        It all started when iwas just a little kid. My dream was to be invisable so nobody could see me and i would be able to do what ever I wanted. So i told some of my cuzins and freinds I wanted to be invisable and all they said was that's impossible for that to happen. But i didn't let them bring me down. So, instead me,  my mom, and my dad for vacation. While we were down there we visited  alot of old temples and pyrimids. Once we came to the main pyrimid and while on tour around it i snuck off. I walked on into the dark for a minute or so, and just as I was about to turn around to go back I felt a handle infront of me. It was like a latch so i pulled it. It was dark in the room but there was a switch lantern as soon as you walked in. So I flipped it flipped it on, then the greatest thing of my life happend. I found the temples gold their wastons and tons of it, everywhere. So I jumped in joy thinking how rich im going to be. But as i was stuffing my pockets with gold a shinning light shined in my eyes. I backed away and looked to see where it was coming from. To my surprise the shining light was coming from a solid gold lamp high in the corner. It was reflecting from the rays of the sun squeezing through the cracks of the wall. I tried to climb up the wall to get it, thinking the whole way this was my chance to be invisible. There might be a magic geney in it. I was so exited and I finally reached it. So I grabbed it and dropped down. Then I slowly rubbed my hand across the lustering gold back and fourth...........